Vuelvo a comentar después del cap 3, y pienso que una vez más se pasan. Se pasan en hacer una obra increíble una vez más! Me dejaron sin palabras, y con tristeza por lo que pasó. Sin duda valió la pena la espera, espero pronto que saquen nuevos capitulos para entender los personajes y seguir conociendo la historia que me tiene fascinada. Buen trabajo 🔥
(Aguante Stefan, Saphira y Naomi! Es el mejor, los amoo 😭)
El juego es simplemente increíble, el como se envuelve y desarrolla todo es simplemente algo que nunca había experimentado dentro de una novela visual, incluso es un género que nunca había experimentado y este siendo una de mis primeras VN la considero un excelente trabajo!
Me encantó la historia y el desenlace del capítulo 3 es bastante curioso e intrigante, fue cine.
Aunque no sea un personaje muy interesante encajé mucho con Naomi, siento que es la hermana (o hija) pequeña que nunca tuve y siempre quería estar con ella y protegerla, como si realmente pudiera sentir y envolverme con el personaje :')
Como único detalle siento que hay algunos "inconsistencias" con la traducción al español, por ejemplo con "el cosa", algunos otros pequeños errores gramaticales pero todo súper entendible, quisiera poder aportar con el proyecto, muchas gracias por este trabajo Pix! ^^
holy shit... Me and a friend found this game on random and played through the whole thing in one sitting and oh god. This is so underrated. The writing is so well done, and the voice acting is so well executed for this kind of game. This is an absolute must play for any dark VN lovers
Spoilers ahead!!!
i think that the story is well written so far as what we have seen so far (chap 3). The mystery and the dynamic relationships are very well written, and no one has acting out of character nor acting strange for the situation. That hard to do when you want to express certain things about a character. Leonel is unironically the best character, it's not common they have this kind of character and it's so funny to see the dynamics between more stereotypical character's u see in killing games. I hope we get to see more sides of him but without losing his unseriuos appelle. But mostly bc i wanna see him get his shit rocked properly.
I am so excited to play the next chapters, such a good find right here folks. Also, those tags don't lie and I'm scared, going through all the options and seeing the differing dialog and routes and relationship changes depending on your actions is so cool to see (even if i wish we had a little more impact).
Also, small note for the VA's YALL ARE SO FUCKING TALANTED. I was worried we'd need to mute the voices bc this is an indie but the voice acting only enhances the game to another level. Personal fav is ofc Vir but Niaomi is also such a perfect fit.
Dios santo bendito, que estrés pase en este capítulo!!! Tenía mucho miedo de lo que podría pasar porque ya me lo olía pero a pesar de todo lo disfrute. Me encanta como este juego me hace pensar en todo, en cada detalle y desconfiar de cada cosa, es una tortura pero también es estimulante. Espero que sigas con este maravilloso juego, muchas bendiciones y abrazos🥰😘.
Me hace muy feliz que lo hayas disfrutado a pesar del estrés (¡que era la idea, jeje!) Que el juego te haga pensar en cada detalle y dudar de todo es justo lo que busco — es una tortura cariñosa 😌 Por supuesto que voy a seguir, ¡esto apenas empieza! Muchísimas gracias por tus palabras tan lindas, las bendiciones y los abrazos. Te mando otro abrazo bien fuerte<33
I fucking love this game sm <3 and i do think that mc is actually quite suspicious, although we are so called 'fbi' the game in the train gave us special treatment and how did the fbi actually manage to get mc specifically picked for the abduction too if that tv stated it was randomised? And why was I (not mc's train of thought) and naomi, a literal child, picking up clues and piecing them together at the dinner table quicker than so called fbi mc that has blurry memories and a slow thought process not very fbi trained it seems..? Mc showed us no characteristics that are exclusively for the fbi trained, all mc did was be mentally stable than most and did generic fbi actions that could be picked up off movies or shows. Vir, oh lord, after that drug gas incident acting clueless, dear god mc please believe in yourself more and is he trying make us jealous or smth while 'comforting felicia' he is the gassiest gaslighter, love him tho <333
I looove how closely you're reading this 😭 i'm not gonna confirm or deny a single thing — you'll just have to keep playing to find out! But i will say i love watching everyone come up with their own theories. Thank you so much for loving the game, it means so much💜
This game is so good! The story, characters, voice acting and CG are all great! You're doing a fantastic job! I'm looking forward to playing the complete game. Good luck, author!
omg i love love love this so much!!! spoilers for anyone who hasn't played yet! you've been warned ;) There's no way MC is actually FBI. They missed so many things. Besides if they were sent in to investigate, they would know a little more. it seems MC is going in blind as well. Also, the fact that the I.D. was on them, and their memory isn't clear, so someone definitely could have messed with it. Is the wallet actually theirs though? It took them a second to realize it was there in chapter one. was that cause their memory is fucked or because it doesn't actually belong to them.
Back to MC being a little oblivious, not saying they aren't smart. How come no one picked up on verity's clue? They were only ever really promised one thing, yet no one seemed to question it (except maybe vir) even after Verity warned them. I guess it was just stress of the situation. Random thought. giving them something to eat before showing them something so disturbing was absolutely foul though. straight up evil. R.I.P we lost a baddie. the afterlife better treat her well.
I feel so bad though cause i was sitting there staring at my screen like.... mhm mmhmm i made the right choice. and i would do it again. im soooo sorryyyy aahhhhhh!!! i love you i just love naomi more. that's my daughter. side note, i hope Felicity didnt vote for Saphira. how do you ever recover from that?
it seems pretty clear that the experiment is on the human brain (idk if thats the right wording). I mean they literally said it in chapter one. I'm curious to see what the characters think it is. And what its real purpose is! MC thinks its for entertainment,. Now is that because of what the others were saying or did they think that from the start? I know they said it was just a sick game, but i still wonder.
it seems pretty clear that the experiment is on the human brain (idk if thats the right wording). I mean they literally said it in chapter one. I'm curious to see what the characters think it is. And what its real purpose is! MC thinks its for entertainment,. Now is that because of what the others were saying or did they think that from the start? I know they said it was just a sick game, but i still wonder.
Also, vir, my man, you thief, liar, gaslighter, we the fuck were you hugging another woman!! why are you giving her your fake sympathy?! holding her so tight was suspicious AF. but that was supposed to be meeeee! i want that jacket, and the fake sympathy. bitch i want everything cause im greedy. im dying. beggin' on my knees. please. why not me.
that man has no business being that attractive.
anyways, this game is so good. i think you did so well. And i love all the characters, they are so well written. the story is so well crafted. idk if you can tell but im invested. You have my heart and soul. Can't wait to see more. im exited to be surprised <3
I might be down bad for the stranger. that organization, him, whoever's idea this experiment was is so sick. and did us all sooo dirty. but i love my mystery man. And i would have gladly entered that train willingly, if i knew i would get to hear his annoying mocking voice. Trust i will get him.
okay sorry for rambling byeeeeee. if you read all this im so greatfull. 100/10 game
Edit: this might sound dumb. is it just one person working on this??
OKAY WOW HOLY MOLLYYY, this comment just made my entire week 🤩🤩 the fact that you're this invested means everything to me..! I'm not confirming or denying a single one of your theories though hehehe, but I LOVE watching you piece things together. And yes.. feeding them before that was a choice 😈
Thank you for rambling, genuinely!!!! Reading this is the best part of my day, that was amazing. And yes, it's just me working on this vn (plus the voice actors)!♡
Well you and the va's did amazing!! I know I already said this, but I'm really impressed. definitely my fav vn I've played this year. Also, I love your humor <3
Basically the only "nitpick" Is that I noticed sometimes the dialogue the VAs are speaking are different than what the text says, or sometimes a character says a word very differently than usual? Idk its something ive wondered about throughout the game!
Yeah, there are a few moments like that, but it's literally just 2–3 lines here and there, hehe. They don't really change the meaning — just the wording. At the end of the day they're voice ACTORS, so I don't mind a little improvisation sometimes, if it sounds good^^
Oh, now I see!.. A MacBook is actually the only device I wasn't able to test for bugs because I don't have one. Unfortunately, there's nothing I can do about it right now. I'll try to contact a friend who has a MacBook later and see if I can figure out what's causing the issue.
By the way, have you tried chapter 3? Is Vir the only character whose voice doesn't work there as well?
No, I haven’t tried chapter three yet but I will soon! I’ll try it very soon though. By the way this visual novel is top tier so thank you so much for making it 😭 I LOVE IT SO MUCH
Aww, thank you so much, it really means a lot to hear that!^^ I'd also really appreciate it if you could let me know whether the voice acting in chapter 3 is working properly once you get there, or if it's only Vir who's having issues like in chapter 2 😊
I love this game, thank you so much for your effort and for the well-crafted story... I have so many questions about Vir's relationship with the protagonist. I know it might be silly to ask because they're secrets from future chapters, but I'd like to know if Vir's behavior towards the protagonist is related to some kind of "romance" or "story," or if it's just a general thing Vir does towards everyone... I hope you can answer my somewhat silly question. Thank you for this wonderful game; I'm fascinated! ><
Estoy alucinando totalmente, me tarde algunos días en jugar este nuevo capítulo 3 porque quería darme el gusto de disfrutar de ello. En definitiva, sentí todo y me alegro de haber hecho un espacio en mi horario para concentrarme en el capítulo. De las mejores experiencias que tuve, me sumergí totalmente. Estoy boquiabierta y esperaría hasta años por el capítulo 4, amo el trabajo que hacen. Es alucinante, lo juro.
I can't wait for Chapter 4 after finishing Chapter 3! It was so good and so intriguing. Sending encouragement to Sweepix and the voice actors! Incredible work 🙌🏽.
I am SO in love with Vir! He looks even better in the third chapter, and I think you made him more attractive on purpose! Also, I knew that he was a good person, and his words and actions confirmed it. He also proved how intelligent, and calm he can be, even in extreme situations. He is definitely 'Best Boy'!
Esta novela se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas, me encanta la trama de la historia, el diseño y desarrollo de cada personaje, y ni hablar de las voces, ¡Una locura! Ojalá tenga todo el apoyo que se merece, se nota la dedicación con la que hicieron todo esto y espero que puedan seguir con la novela sin dificultades!
holy shit, this was so good. Such a great experience, Im compellty hooked. When I firts downloaded the game I literally had no idea what would await me, looking forward to the next chapter :)
HoooooooooBOY. Wow, what a fucking trip. I did a full replay, and I'm on the edge of my seat with that cliff hanger, it was SO good. Delicious. Good soup 🤌
CH3 SPOILERS
Why did she die, bro????? 😭😫 I mean I know why, but WHYYYY??? She was sooo cool! We lost a baddie...
I already figured I shouldn't be too attached to each character, cuz duh, but they're all so well written I couldn't help it. I really wanted to get ALL of them out alive somehow. Can't have shit on the death train Hunger Games survival simulator 😔👊 Even though it was technically the "right" choice, when I couldn't save one person, it still felt like I was LOSING somehow, becoming more entangled in the game.
Hooooo, when I catch that "gamemaster" or whatever bitchless god theyre calling themself, OOOOOH when I CATCH THAT-
ahem.
And honestly, I am WAY more suspicious of Vir now. I mean, obviously he was already sus AF at the start, but he still seemed to be in it with the rest of the group. But now, hmmmmmm... HMMMM *aggressive finger wag* Your pretty hair and sudden display of sympathy aint gon work on ME, white boy.
But I'm honestly so so curious too. I want to like, crack open his skull and rummage around in his thought process, like why is he Like That™ yknow? We've really been left with way more questions than answers.
And yeah, MC! Why ARE you so unprepared as a damn FBI agent???
Anyways yeah, this story is so interesting and well written. Claps for you 👏👏👏 Take care and cant wait for the next chapter !
HOLY PEAK, this game is extremely good, I love the story so much it's so interesting, like I'm out here dying to know what is going to happen next!! just finished chapter 3 and Im so excited for the next chapter!!!
this game is genuinely so incredible dear lord each of the characters are so interesting, everything that happens feels like its naturally progressing, I adore it, and like the mc isn't incredibly bland like so many are. there aren't many games I would go back to play if I got my memory wiped, but 100% id go back to this, its so insane and such a good story which is so crazy and intense when you go through it for the first time, the voice acting, art and writing for this whole game make it one of my fave random games I saw here and downloaded out of boredom
chapter 3 spoilers ahead (genuinely go play it before reading the rest)
holy shit that was insane ong throught all of that I was genuinely questioning everything, this game has such a way of actually making you feel like ur totally in the mc's like mind, or like your actually in that game, each choice comes up again that you've made, changing dialogue and story itself. with that dinner bit I did vote for Naomi, and jeez that just made me feel even more protective of her (she's genuinely my child ong) but that bit with saphira shook me to my core, like I saw verity's face when it happened and I knew something was gonna happen, but that was insane.
this game is amazing i think about it all the time and i just have to let you know during chapter three i was writing things down to play the game with the characters and guess and i guessed correctly but at what cost 😭😭😭 im hoping verity is an ro because she's been my number one since day one lol (ily too naomi just differently) so i can have doomed yuri because gahah
chapter three was a whirlwind im actually losing my mind anyways thank you this game is wonderful please take a much much well deserved break after relseasing this omg i cant even imagine the work you put into realizing your story and thank you for letting us play it :D
Idk why but the audio won't play for me in this game? I check the settings and the volume slider is all the way up and so is my laptop does anyone know a solution? I really wanna hear the voice acting and other stuff.
Okay... wow. This is just something. This is incredible!
Chapter 3 is truly insane! It contains horror and shock and incredible discoveries and mystery and... elite flirtation hehe...
Vir, my man, you should be illegal. Your looks, your mind, your voice. I'm obsessed.
Well, what can I say in conclusion... from now on, all I care about is my smart, charismatic, mysterious yandere husband and my calm, innocent, quiet daughter.
The plot keeps getting more and more interesting! I can't wait for the next update! Thank you!!!
P.S. I also want to theorize a little. Given the revelation at the end of the episode, I have a feeling there'll be "don't judge a book by its cover" twist. And we're actually not a secret agents at all. But that's just a guess.
I don't often post comments because i'm a lazy potato, but after sitting through this game...I played all 3 chapters in this one day, and it was the most interesting slow burn themed story ever. I dislike slow burns for the most part because of the fact it's slow, but this story does a really good job at keeping things interested. I feel like there was not a lot of choices we could make, and if there was a choice, it was the most crazy choice in the world LOL (cough, chapter 3), Though at the same time it didn't change my happiness while playing since it was just so interesting. The moment the 'to be continued' popped up my heart shattered, I was like NOOoOooooo. I can't wait til more chapters come out and thank you for giving this master piece to us for free <3.
Wow, it's really nice to hear that I managed to make the story enjoyable for you despite its slow pacing, especially considering you're not really a fan of that kind of storytelling. Sorry, but I looooooove slow burns haha😚🤩
To be honest, I have realized with cdramas, I have also started liking slow burns because I need to know what happens so I actually finish the series for once LOL, So maybe i'm more into it than I think. I did really like your story though!
I've never had much faith in visual novels if i'm being completely honest. Since every one of them kind of run the same? I'm talking about the ones with the 'yandere' tag since that's what im personally interested in. When I came across this game, I believe it was simply on my home page, first thing I did was read through the reviews and found nothing but positive remarks, so I gave it a try.
And holy fucking shit when I tell you this game was a masterpiece. Literally, it might've just become my new favourite. The plot-twists, secrecy, characters, voice acting, art, roles. The whole game is literally perfection in my eyes and im just itching for chapter four.
11/10 game, if you're looking for a literal breath of fresh air in a visual novel. I kid you not. Personally it took me about 2 and 1/2 hours to completely finish the game, did speed up the text speed a bit and skipped over some of the voice acting since im an impatient little prick. But honestly other than that I enjoyed it to the very end. Not gonna spoiler anything, but it'll blow your mind.
Keep doing what you're doing and I cant wait for chapter four! Make sure to take some time off for yourself as well, the more breaks you take for yourself the better you function. Stressing will only cause mistakes and what not. Keep doing what your doing SweePix, i'm becoming a huge fan of what you do! <33
Im gonna get jumped for sure for this but the 3d episode was a little weird for me. MC, who is an agent, even poorly prepared/with lost memory, was too passive, haven't figured out the play on words, well, heck, they haven't even questioned it for a second! Aren't they supposed to be motr cautious? Not trusting everything the voice said? Where had their deduction went that they clearly had in previous chapters? Yeah for the sake of the plot maybe they couldn't have thought about it, but after? Why Stefan was the one with revelation about the "prize"? Why MC was so astonished at this, the thought never crossed their mind? I still loved the episode but it felt more like the novel with no player character needed at all Don't get me wrong, I'm not talking about "MC must be the center of the universe", not at all, and deuteragonists ARE cool characters (Watson my guy), but in this particular episode I felt it was somewhat OOC of MC because of their role in this whole situation, and I say this as someone viewing MC as their own character, not self-insert. There was no monologue about MC's feelings, just in passing like a quick thought, they haven't participated in the discussion much, they were too silent, and their role in this chapter was just to nod at someone else's words. I also found it strange that there wasn't even the option to hold onto Naomi when all of them were freed as to comfort her or move her away, that's quite the logical thing to do for someone in their field (not to say an adult who took a duty of protecting the child, which was explicitly stated earlier in this chapter) — to make sure the child wouldn't look even more at the gruesome sight of death Other than that the 3d chapter was amazing. I loved build-up to the climax of the chapter, I loved how everyone interacted with eachother, their relationships and deteriorating state of mind was immaculately written. And of course voice actors deserve their own post full of praises, really Thank you for the feast! (the irony)
Woaah, that's a lot of thoughts! First of all, I want to say that many of the things you didn't like will only make sense once the entire game is out. As they say, it's hard to judge an unfinished story. That said, I completely understand why some moments might have felt confusing to you! ^^ The only thing I can really say is... keep following the story and pay VERY close attention if you want to understand the story. Also, you sure this is actually out of character for the MC? How much deduction have they used in previous chapters? Have they really been taking an active role and initiating all of the discussions? I’d recommend replaying the first two chapters to refresh your memory, because things are faaaar more complicated than they seem muhehe! 😉
Thank you so much for your answer! I hope my comment didnt come across like hate, I'm truly enjoying this project, and really gratefull that you let us read it for free. I will certainly replay everything now!
It's okay, I completely understand! MtG still has a long journey ahead of it, along with plenty of answers to many of the questions people have. I'd love to reveal all my cards and explain everything right here and now, but where's the fun in that? So for now, I'll stick to my terrifyingly slow-slooooooow buuuurn 😈
had to set aside my pride and make a account. dude. this game was AMAZING. the emotion genuinely felt so raw and right at the big boom boom i felt genuine shivers down my spine at the scene. the art and voice acting and how you had each character portrayed was so amazing, like this was straight fire.. heh..
i love my baby naomi so much, she was so adorable and i constantly felt so bad for her. im just so surprised on how nonchalant she is??? as well as the MC, id be vomiting my guts out if i saw that real time. gotta be honest, vir's gaslight pmo soo badly but its fine because hes a shady enigma whos super duper fine, and he has white hair with a black shirt so, my man my man!!!!
i love this game so much, i literally will be waiting outside your door as your typing the code just so i know when chapter 4 is coming. amazing work to the dev team and voice actors, you all did so great!
(though, felicia made me really mad, but her screams of angst were so pure i kinda have to put it all aside.)
Omg, another person created an account just for MtG? I'm honored! Thank you so much!!💖I'm glad the story and characters resonated with you! Naomi nation stays strong, I see heh.....>:) And thank you for the kind words about the art, VAs!
As for chapter 4, please step away from my front door haha. The neighbors are starting to ask questions....
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Vuelvo a comentar después del cap 3, y pienso que una vez más se pasan. Se pasan en hacer una obra increíble una vez más! Me dejaron sin palabras, y con tristeza por lo que pasó. Sin duda valió la pena la espera, espero pronto que saquen nuevos capitulos para entender los personajes y seguir conociendo la historia que me tiene fascinada. Buen trabajo 🔥
(Aguante Stefan, Saphira y Naomi! Es el mejor, los amoo 😭)
Vas a caer Vir...
El juego es simplemente increíble, el como se envuelve y desarrolla todo es simplemente algo que nunca había experimentado dentro de una novela visual, incluso es un género que nunca había experimentado y este siendo una de mis primeras VN la considero un excelente trabajo!
Me encantó la historia y el desenlace del capítulo 3 es bastante curioso e intrigante, fue cine.
Aunque no sea un personaje muy interesante encajé mucho con Naomi, siento que es la hermana (o hija) pequeña que nunca tuve y siempre quería estar con ella y protegerla, como si realmente pudiera sentir y envolverme con el personaje :')
Como único detalle siento que hay algunos "inconsistencias" con la traducción al español, por ejemplo con "el cosa", algunos otros pequeños errores gramaticales pero todo súper entendible, quisiera poder aportar con el proyecto, muchas gracias por este trabajo Pix! ^^
holy shit... Me and a friend found this game on random and played through the whole thing in one sitting and oh god. This is so underrated. The writing is so well done, and the voice acting is so well executed for this kind of game. This is an absolute must play for any dark VN lovers
Spoilers ahead!!!
i think that the story is well written so far as what we have seen so far (chap 3). The mystery and the dynamic relationships are very well written, and no one has acting out of character nor acting strange for the situation. That hard to do when you want to express certain things about a character. Leonel is unironically the best character, it's not common they have this kind of character and it's so funny to see the dynamics between more stereotypical character's u see in killing games. I hope we get to see more sides of him but without losing his unseriuos appelle. But mostly bc i wanna see him get his shit rocked properly.
I am so excited to play the next chapters, such a good find right here folks. Also, those tags don't lie and I'm scared, going through all the options and seeing the differing dialog and routes and relationship changes depending on your actions is so cool to see (even if i wish we had a little more impact).
Also, small note for the VA's YALL ARE SO FUCKING TALANTED. I was worried we'd need to mute the voices bc this is an indie but the voice acting only enhances the game to another level. Personal fav is ofc Vir but Niaomi is also such a perfect fit.
Lo estaba esperando tanto, ame el capítulo Espero con ansias lo que viene después 😭🫶🏼 (te amo Vir)
Dios santo bendito, que estrés pase en este capítulo!!! Tenía mucho miedo de lo que podría pasar porque ya me lo olía pero a pesar de todo lo disfrute. Me encanta como este juego me hace pensar en todo, en cada detalle y desconfiar de cada cosa, es una tortura pero también es estimulante. Espero que sigas con este maravilloso juego, muchas bendiciones y abrazos🥰😘.
Me hace muy feliz que lo hayas disfrutado a pesar del estrés (¡que era la idea, jeje!) Que el juego te haga pensar en cada detalle y dudar de todo es justo lo que busco — es una tortura cariñosa 😌 Por supuesto que voy a seguir, ¡esto apenas empieza! Muchísimas gracias por tus palabras tan lindas, las bendiciones y los abrazos. Te mando otro abrazo bien fuerte<33
I fucking love this game sm <3 and i do think that mc is actually quite suspicious, although we are so called 'fbi' the game in the train gave us special treatment and how did the fbi actually manage to get mc specifically picked for the abduction too if that tv stated it was randomised? And why was I (not mc's train of thought) and naomi, a literal child, picking up clues and piecing them together at the dinner table quicker than so called fbi mc that has blurry memories and a slow thought process not very fbi trained it seems..? Mc showed us no characteristics that are exclusively for the fbi trained, all mc did was be mentally stable than most and did generic fbi actions that could be picked up off movies or shows. Vir, oh lord, after that drug gas incident acting clueless, dear god mc please believe in yourself more and is he trying make us jealous or smth while 'comforting felicia' he is the gassiest gaslighter, love him tho <333
I looove how closely you're reading this 😭 i'm not gonna confirm or deny a single thing — you'll just have to keep playing to find out! But i will say i love watching everyone come up with their own theories. Thank you so much for loving the game, it means so much💜
Can't wait for more gameplay! Tysm for blessing me with this vn, definitely one of my favs<3
this is actually one of my favorites vn of all times holy shit
That's quite the compliment...🤩!
This game is so good! The story, characters, voice acting and CG are all great! You're doing a fantastic job! I'm looking forward to playing the complete game. Good luck, author!
omg i love love love this so much!!! spoilers for anyone who hasn't played yet! you've been warned ;) There's no way MC is actually FBI. They missed so many things. Besides if they were sent in to investigate, they would know a little more. it seems MC is going in blind as well. Also, the fact that the I.D. was on them, and their memory isn't clear, so someone definitely could have messed with it. Is the wallet actually theirs though? It took them a second to realize it was there in chapter one. was that cause their memory is fucked or because it doesn't actually belong to them.
Back to MC being a little oblivious, not saying they aren't smart. How come no one picked up on verity's clue? They were only ever really promised one thing, yet no one seemed to question it (except maybe vir) even after Verity warned them. I guess it was just stress of the situation. Random thought. giving them something to eat before showing them something so disturbing was absolutely foul though. straight up evil. R.I.P we lost a baddie. the afterlife better treat her well.
I feel so bad though cause i was sitting there staring at my screen like.... mhm mmhmm i made the right choice. and i would do it again. im soooo sorryyyy aahhhhhh!!! i love you i just love naomi more. that's my daughter. side note, i hope Felicity didnt vote for Saphira. how do you ever recover from that?
it seems pretty clear that the experiment is on the human brain (idk if thats the right wording). I mean they literally said it in chapter one. I'm curious to see what the characters think it is. And what its real purpose is! MC thinks its for entertainment,. Now is that because of what the others were saying or did they think that from the start? I know they said it was just a sick game, but i still wonder.
it seems pretty clear that the experiment is on the human brain (idk if thats the right wording). I mean they literally said it in chapter one. I'm curious to see what the characters think it is. And what its real purpose is! MC thinks its for entertainment,. Now is that because of what the others were saying or did they think that from the start? I know they said it was just a sick game, but i still wonder.
Also, vir, my man, you thief, liar, gaslighter, we the fuck were you hugging another woman!! why are you giving her your fake sympathy?! holding her so tight was suspicious AF. but that was supposed to be meeeee! i want that jacket, and the fake sympathy. bitch i want everything cause im greedy. im dying. beggin' on my knees. please. why not me.
that man has no business being that attractive.
anyways, this game is so good. i think you did so well. And i love all the characters, they are so well written. the story is so well crafted. idk if you can tell but im invested. You have my heart and soul. Can't wait to see more. im exited to be surprised <3
I might be down bad for the stranger. that organization, him, whoever's idea this experiment was is so sick. and did us all sooo dirty. but i love my mystery man. And i would have gladly entered that train willingly, if i knew i would get to hear his annoying mocking voice. Trust i will get him.
okay sorry for rambling byeeeeee. if you read all this im so greatfull. 100/10 game
Edit: this might sound dumb. is it just one person working on this??
OKAY WOW HOLY MOLLYYY, this comment just made my entire week 🤩🤩 the fact that you're this invested means everything to me..! I'm not confirming or denying a single one of your theories though hehehe, but I LOVE watching you piece things together. And yes.. feeding them before that was a choice 😈
Thank you for rambling, genuinely!!!! Reading this is the best part of my day, that was amazing. And yes, it's just me working on this vn (plus the voice actors)!♡
Well you and the va's did amazing!! I know I already said this, but I'm really impressed. definitely my fav vn I've played this year. Also, I love your humor <3
I LOVE THIS GAME AAAA
Basically the only "nitpick" Is that I noticed sometimes the dialogue the VAs are speaking are different than what the text says, or sometimes a character says a word very differently than usual? Idk its something ive wondered about throughout the game!
Yeah, there are a few moments like that, but it's literally just 2–3 lines here and there, hehe. They don't really change the meaning — just the wording. At the end of the day they're voice ACTORS, so I don't mind a little improvisation sometimes, if it sounds good^^
Ohh okay! Thank you! :3
vir mi twink favorito gracias por el capitulo 3 y los fondas nuesvos te quedaron incluso mejor que los anteriores, juego peak
¡Muchas gracias!<3
Bellissimo si sono italiana mi e piaciuto molto spero arriverà presto un capitolo 4 ed vir e bellissimo
Masterpiece
I love this game! I have a quick question! I don't know if it's a glitch but Vir's voice stopped working at chapter two! is that supposed to happen?
Looks like it's a bug! Try either restarting chapter 2 or reinstalling the game
just tried restarting chapter 2 an restarting the game and its still the same! Its for the MacBook version
Oh, now I see!.. A MacBook is actually the only device I wasn't able to test for bugs because I don't have one. Unfortunately, there's nothing I can do about it right now. I'll try to contact a friend who has a MacBook later and see if I can figure out what's causing the issue.
By the way, have you tried chapter 3? Is Vir the only character whose voice doesn't work there as well?
No, I haven’t tried chapter three yet but I will soon! I’ll try it very soon though. By the way this visual novel is top tier so thank you so much for making it 😭 I LOVE IT SO MUCH
Aww, thank you so much, it really means a lot to hear that!^^ I'd also really appreciate it if you could let me know whether the voice acting in chapter 3 is working properly once you get there, or if it's only Vir who's having issues like in chapter 2 😊
I love this game, thank you so much for your effort and for the well-crafted story... I have so many questions about Vir's relationship with the protagonist. I know it might be silly to ask because they're secrets from future chapters, but I'd like to know if Vir's behavior towards the protagonist is related to some kind of "romance" or "story," or if it's just a general thing Vir does towards everyone... I hope you can answer my somewhat silly question. Thank you for this wonderful game; I'm fascinated! ><
Estoy alucinando totalmente, me tarde algunos días en jugar este nuevo capítulo 3 porque quería darme el gusto de disfrutar de ello. En definitiva, sentí todo y me alegro de haber hecho un espacio en mi horario para concentrarme en el capítulo. De las mejores experiencias que tuve, me sumergí totalmente. Estoy boquiabierta y esperaría hasta años por el capítulo 4, amo el trabajo que hacen. Es alucinante, lo juro.
I can't wait for Chapter 4 after finishing Chapter 3! It was so good and so intriguing. Sending encouragement to Sweepix and the voice actors! Incredible work 🙌🏽.
Also I love you take time to read the comments and answer some of them! :)
Thank you!! <3 So happy you enjoyed chapter 3 ! And reading your comments is genuinely my favorite part 🥹
I am SO in love with Vir! He looks even better in the third chapter, and I think you made him more attractive on purpose! Also, I knew that he was a good person, and his words and actions confirmed it. He also proved how intelligent, and calm he can be, even in extreme situations. He is definitely 'Best Boy'!
Yeeeaah, Vir's truly an innocent angel!!🤍😇
Esta novela se ha vuelto una de mis favoritas, me encanta la trama de la historia, el diseño y desarrollo de cada personaje, y ni hablar de las voces, ¡Una locura! Ojalá tenga todo el apoyo que se merece, se nota la dedicación con la que hicieron todo esto y espero que puedan seguir con la novela sin dificultades!
¡Muchas gracias! Siempre me alegra muchísimo leer comentarios así. Prometo seguir creando y continuar con la novela, jeje
Esta es una de las mejores novelas visuales que he conocido!!! :p (hagan ruta de Leonel 👅)
holy shit, this was so good. Such a great experience, Im compellty hooked. When I firts downloaded the game I literally had no idea what would await me, looking forward to the next chapter :)
Literally me rn:
Hooooooooo BOY. Wow, what a fucking trip. I did a full replay, and I'm on the edge of my seat with that cliff hanger, it was SO good. Delicious. Good soup 🤌
CH3 SPOILERS
Why did she die, bro????? 😭😫 I mean I know why, but WHYYYY??? She was sooo cool! We lost a baddie...
I already figured I shouldn't be too attached to each character, cuz duh, but they're all so well written I couldn't help it. I really wanted to get ALL of them out alive somehow. Can't have shit on the death train Hunger Games survival simulator 😔👊 Even though it was technically the "right" choice, when I couldn't save one person, it still felt like I was LOSING somehow, becoming more entangled in the game.
Hooooo, when I catch that "gamemaster" or whatever bitchless god theyre calling themself, OOOOOH when I CATCH THAT-
ahem.
And honestly, I am WAY more suspicious of Vir now. I mean, obviously he was already sus AF at the start, but he still seemed to be in it with the rest of the group. But now, hmmmmmm... HMMMM *aggressive finger wag* Your pretty hair and sudden display of sympathy aint gon work on ME, white boy.
But I'm honestly so so curious too. I want to like, crack open his skull and rummage around in his thought process, like why is he Like That™ yknow? We've really been left with way more questions than answers.
And yeah, MC! Why ARE you so unprepared as a damn FBI agent???
Anyways yeah, this story is so interesting and well written. Claps for you 👏👏👏 Take care and cant wait for the next chapter !
OMGG, thank you, thank you!!♡ That was so interesting to read hehe!
HOLY PEAK, this game is extremely good, I love the story so much it's so interesting, like I'm out here dying to know what is going to happen next!! just finished chapter 3 and Im so excited for the next chapter!!!
this game is genuinely so incredible dear lord each of the characters are so interesting, everything that happens feels like its naturally progressing, I adore it, and like the mc isn't incredibly bland like so many are. there aren't many games I would go back to play if I got my memory wiped, but 100% id go back to this, its so insane and such a good story which is so crazy and intense when you go through it for the first time, the voice acting, art and writing for this whole game make it one of my fave random games I saw here and downloaded out of boredom
chapter 3 spoilers ahead (genuinely go play it before reading the rest)
holy shit that was insane ong throught all of that I was genuinely questioning everything, this game has such a way of actually making you feel like ur totally in the mc's like mind, or like your actually in that game, each choice comes up again that you've made, changing dialogue and story itself. with that dinner bit I did vote for Naomi, and jeez that just made me feel even more protective of her (she's genuinely my child ong) but that bit with saphira shook me to my core, like I saw verity's face when it happened and I knew something was gonna happen, but that was insane.
this game is amazing i think about it all the time and i just have to let you know during chapter three i was writing things down to play the game with the characters and guess and i guessed correctly but at what cost 😭😭😭 im hoping verity is an ro because she's been my number one since day one lol (ily too naomi just differently) so i can have doomed yuri because gahah
chapter three was a whirlwind im actually losing my mind anyways thank you this game is wonderful please take a much much well deserved break after relseasing this omg i cant even imagine the work you put into realizing your story and thank you for letting us play it :D
Idk why but the audio won't play for me in this game? I check the settings and the volume slider is all the way up and so is my laptop does anyone know a solution? I really wanna hear the voice acting and other stuff.
El capítulo 3 fue simplemente una LOCURA y me encantó! Espero poder seguir conociendo más a Vir y obviamente proteger a mi pequeña hija Naomi 🩷.
Realmente no conozco mucho sobre tarot pero pude entender lo que quisieron decir bastante bien, gracias por las explicaciones de cada carta!
Quedé en shock por el festín pero estoy ansiosa por seguir viendo cómo se desarrolla la historia 🩷
OH MY GOD, I'VE WAITED FOR THIS MOMENT. I love this novel sm, the plot the characters are both peak, and Naomi, oh my poor baby 💔
Okay... wow. This is just something. This is incredible!
Chapter 3 is truly insane! It contains horror and shock and incredible discoveries and mystery and... elite flirtation hehe...
Vir, my man, you should be illegal. Your looks, your mind, your voice. I'm obsessed.Well, what can I say in conclusion... from now on, all I care about is my smart, charismatic, mysterious yandere husband and my calm, innocent, quiet daughter.
The plot keeps getting more and more interesting! I can't wait for the next update! Thank you!!!
P.S. I also want to theorize a little. Given the revelation at the end of the episode, I have a feeling there'll be "don't judge a book by its cover" twist. And we're actually not a secret agents at all. But that's just a guess.
I don't often post comments because i'm a lazy potato, but after sitting through this game...I played all 3 chapters in this one day, and it was the most interesting slow burn themed story ever. I dislike slow burns for the most part because of the fact it's slow, but this story does a really good job at keeping things interested. I feel like there was not a lot of choices we could make, and if there was a choice, it was the most crazy choice in the world LOL (cough, chapter 3), Though at the same time it didn't change my happiness while playing since it was just so interesting. The moment the 'to be continued' popped up my heart shattered, I was like NOOoOooooo. I can't wait til more chapters come out and thank you for giving this master piece to us for free <3.
Wow, it's really nice to hear that I managed to make the story enjoyable for you despite its slow pacing, especially considering you're not really a fan of that kind of storytelling. Sorry, but I looooooove slow burns haha😚🤩
To be honest, I have realized with cdramas, I have also started liking slow burns because I need to know what happens so I actually finish the series for once LOL, So maybe i'm more into it than I think. I did really like your story though!
I've never had much faith in visual novels if i'm being completely honest. Since every one of them kind of run the same? I'm talking about the ones with the 'yandere' tag since that's what im personally interested in. When I came across this game, I believe it was simply on my home page, first thing I did was read through the reviews and found nothing but positive remarks, so I gave it a try.
And holy fucking shit when I tell you this game was a masterpiece. Literally, it might've just become my new favourite. The plot-twists, secrecy, characters, voice acting, art, roles. The whole game is literally perfection in my eyes and im just itching for chapter four.
11/10 game, if you're looking for a literal breath of fresh air in a visual novel. I kid you not. Personally it took me about 2 and 1/2 hours to completely finish the game, did speed up the text speed a bit and skipped over some of the voice acting since im an impatient little prick. But honestly other than that I enjoyed it to the very end. Not gonna spoiler anything, but it'll blow your mind.
Keep doing what you're doing and I cant wait for chapter four! Make sure to take some time off for yourself as well, the more breaks you take for yourself the better you function. Stressing will only cause mistakes and what not. Keep doing what your doing SweePix, i'm becoming a huge fan of what you do! <33
Awwh, jeez, thank you so much, I'm touched!!😭😭🥹 Such kind and motivating words truly melt my heart
CHAPTER THREEEEEEEEEEEE RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HOLY MOLY???
IM AT A LOST FOR WORDS..
YOU CAN'T BE LEAVING US WITH THAT CLIFFHANGER NOW. NOOOOO
I wanna leave a long detailed observation and to share my awe for this game too but im just too speechless 🥹
ABSOLUTE CINEMA.
me encantó completamente cada uno de los capítulos, realmente me emocionó demasiado, tanto como si realmente estuviera viviendolo.
incluso sin estar terminado me ha encantado más de lo que puedo expresar, muero por verlo completo, muero por saber el final.
btw, AMO A VIR, un personaje tan poético y encantador, no desaprovecharía la más mínima oportunidad de saber más sobre él.
OH YEAH MORE VIR CONTENT!!!!!!!!!
Im gonna get jumped for sure for this but the 3d episode was a little weird for me. MC, who is an agent, even poorly prepared/with lost memory, was too passive, haven't figured out the play on words, well, heck, they haven't even questioned it for a second! Aren't they supposed to be motr cautious? Not trusting everything the voice said? Where had their deduction went that they clearly had in previous chapters? Yeah for the sake of the plot maybe they couldn't have thought about it, but after? Why Stefan was the one with revelation about the "prize"? Why MC was so astonished at this, the thought never crossed their mind?
I still loved the episode but it felt more like the novel with no player character needed at all
Don't get me wrong, I'm not talking about "MC must be the center of the universe", not at all, and deuteragonists ARE cool characters (Watson my guy), but in this particular episode I felt it was somewhat OOC of MC because of their role in this whole situation, and I say this as someone viewing MC as their own character, not self-insert.
There was no monologue about MC's feelings, just in passing like a quick thought, they haven't participated in the discussion much, they were too silent, and their role in this chapter was just to nod at someone else's words.
I also found it strange that there wasn't even the option to hold onto Naomi when all of them were freed as to comfort her or move her away, that's quite the logical thing to do for someone in their field (not to say an adult who took a duty of protecting the child, which was explicitly stated earlier in this chapter) — to make sure the child wouldn't look even more at the gruesome sight of death
Other than that the 3d chapter was amazing. I loved build-up to the climax of the chapter, I loved how everyone interacted with eachother, their relationships and deteriorating state of mind was immaculately written. And of course voice actors deserve their own post full of praises, really
Thank you for the feast! (the irony)
Woaah, that's a lot of thoughts! First of all, I want to say that many of the things you didn't like will only make sense once the entire game is out. As they say, it's hard to judge an unfinished story. That said, I completely understand why some moments might have felt confusing to you! ^^
The only thing I can really say is... keep following the story and pay VERY close attention if you want to understand the story.
Also, you sure this is actually out of character for the MC? How much deduction have they used in previous chapters? Have they really been taking an active role and initiating all of the discussions? I’d recommend replaying the first two chapters to refresh your memory, because things are faaaar more complicated than they seem muhehe! 😉
Thank you so much for your answer! I hope my comment didnt come across like hate, I'm truly enjoying this project, and really gratefull that you let us read it for free.
I will certainly replay everything now!
It's okay, I completely understand! MtG still has a long journey ahead of it, along with plenty of answers to many of the questions people have. I'd love to reveal all my cards and explain everything right here and now, but where's the fun in that? So for now, I'll stick to my terrifyingly slow-slooooooow buuuurn 😈
had to set aside my pride and make a account.
dude.
this game was AMAZING. the emotion genuinely felt so raw and right at the big boom boom i felt genuine shivers down my spine at the scene. the art and voice acting and how you had each character portrayed was so amazing, like this was straight fire.. heh..
i love my baby naomi so much, she was so adorable and i constantly felt so bad for her. im just so surprised on how nonchalant she is??? as well as the MC, id be vomiting my guts out if i saw that real time.
gotta be honest, vir's gaslight pmo soo badly but its fine because hes a shady enigma whos super duper fine, and he has white hair with a black shirt so, my man my man!!!!
i love this game so much, i literally will be waiting outside your door as your typing the code just so i know when chapter 4 is coming. amazing work to the dev team and voice actors, you all did so great!
(though, felicia made me really mad, but her screams of angst were so pure i kinda have to put it all aside.)
Omg, another person created an account just for MtG? I'm honored! Thank you so much!!💖I'm glad the story and characters resonated with you! Naomi nation stays strong, I see heh.....>:) And thank you for the kind words about the art, VAs!
As for chapter 4, please step away from my front door haha. The neighbors are starting to ask questions....